martes, 26 de octubre de 2010

A Pirate’s Story

Once upon a time a pirate crew was looking for the legendary treasure in the ocean. That pirate crew was the “Puch-Puch Crew” run by the captain Puchi. The people preferred calling him Puch, the horror king. He was an ugly, scary and crazy pirate. He was 52 years old, his hair was black and he also had an enormous nose. The total number of pirates in that crew was 500. The treasure was in Cartapiz Island, which was the nightmare of all the people in the planet. The adventure started like this.
On the first day; the weather was good. There were few clouds in the sky, and also, the sun was super big. The crew was on Pucherland Beach, an exclusive place only for this crew. At nine o’clock they started the trip to the first island called “Numa Island”. The sea was calm and no other pirates were detected. Puch was sleeping, so the people in the ship were all in silence because if somebody woke him up, he would kill him. 20 minutes later, Puch woke up. They had arrived in the Island. He ordered 20 pirates to explore it. They made 4 groups of 5. They prepared all their things, and they went to explore. These pirates took an hour to bring food and other things. After that, they went to sleep and continued their trip. Days passed and finally Puch’s crew arrived at Cartapiz Island. All the pirates started to walk in search of the treasure. Suddenly bombs started to fall. One of the pirates jumped and with one of his swords; he could cut the bomb in two.
“Thanks”, Puch said.
“Well, it’s my job. I have to do it. But… Are they pirates?” the pirate asked.
“Yes they are; pirates to win!!” Puch exclaimed.
All the pirates started to fight. They used bombs, guns, swords, and other weapons. The Puch pirates were losing because the captain of the other crew was killing all Puch’s pirates.
“Hey, you! Go and kill him” Puch said to one pirate.
That pirate used a gun to kill the Captain. He shot him in the head. After that, they went to the cave, where the treasure was. In the cave, there were a lot of traps. For example, if you stepped on one part of the floor; alarms sounded and arrows came after you, all at the same time. Because all the traps; Puch lost 200 pirates, but he only cared about the treasure. Finally, Puch could open the treasure chest. Puch said:
“Very easy…. Hahahaha!!” Puch laughed.
When he opened the treasure there were only ordinary rocks inside the chest. Puch, felt too disappointed and killed himself. The story of that man ended just like this.



Pen name: Ricardo Fernández
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